Creative+Writing

(second draft)

Character Mix Birthday(brother 14 years old)  Jenna Birthday(sister 12 years old) ViVi harvest- Their mentor and guardian Jack catcher- the evil king of The Randia Kingdom, has the most power.

Setting -Magic time 1253 -small village hue inside The Randia kingdom -Nut mountain- all season is spring, all the flowers in there never wither.

Plot Mix and Jenna are orphans. One day, Vivi on her way back to home found these two Children. The surprising is that Mix two different colors which are red and silver. His sister just has normal brown eyes. So that’s why his name is mix. Vivi is a winch and she has to use magic to cover the colors of his eyes. The reason is two different colors eyes will be concerned as the evils. And the punishment is hanging to die.MIx has training everyday with Vivi to control his power and also learn how to use them.However, Jenna goes to school just like other children in the village.

Point of view The third person

conflicts Mix's sister Jenna jealous about his brother has magic and she was persuaded by the evil king. So she got the strength liquid from the king and pours into the soup and kills Vivi. And she uses the evil magic to let her brother lose power.At last, she and the evil king kills Mix.

Memory When Mix only 5 years old and Jenna only 3 years old. They had a lovely family, but one day, a group of men who were covered their faces and they killed their parents without saying anything. They hided under the barrels, so these could not find them. But Mix remembered the leader of these men has a scar on the right side of his eye. He claimed to himself that one they he would revenge.

Truth Mix actually is Jack's son, but his mother died because his birth. His mother name is April,although she's not the queen,she's the apple of Jack's eyes. Nowadays, her beauty still circulate among the people. She has a hair dazzling like a sun, her profoundly silver eyes seems can pull people's into it. Her glamour face has no blemish. When he simile, even flowers will ashamed and hang their head. So Jack leaves Mix on the side of the road, and Mr.Birthday found him and raised him as his own son. After two years, Mix has his sister Jenna. Mr. Birthday is a servant of Jack, takes care of Jack's daily life. One day, he saw Jack is practicing black magic by accident, but Jack saw him and at that night, he summoned a killer tiger to the Birthday house and killed Mr. Birthday and Mrs. Birthday.

Creative Writing -What you want, no rules -not true-fictional-imaginative -not formal -your mind, from yourself

elements 1.Characters: Ava, Bilbo, Osseola, Kiwi, Louis Thanksgiving, Bird man, Thorin 2.Dialogue simile

3. Place/Setting

Difference Creative Writing Persuasive Writing

Dreaming Strong/Power Mixing Punch Made-up convince Entertain

1. Spanish agent- expose corruption in US government 2. a character is superhuman, can jump from Empire State and lives 3. Two kids explore a haunted house, find a journal of someone who exbezzeled money 4. Meets someone who looks like the main character 5. Mix&Jenna Tow color eyes: silver+red&normal brown eyes 6. A character can only eat batteries for food 7. Wormhole on Earth owned by a garbage man- entrance is in the trush can,people asked him to leave the city and so jump into the wormhole. Goes back 3 years ago and forgets everything. 8. A man in the 19th century ago is a werewolf but doesn't know it. People die mysteriously, killed by a beast, details and dubious.

My cat pillow My cat pillow is so soft that I could feel I'm lying on the back of a sheep.

Fugitive lauguage -homework -novels -poems -songs " When I look into your eyes, it's like watching the night skies." What does this mean and is it positive or negative?" In my opinion, this sentence is about two lovers, and it might be the man says to the woman, her eyes are deep and beautriful like night skies. Which is positive.

1. Eleven forty-four. I want to go home, a voice in Kiwi whispered, raggedy as a child.(P211) 2. Kiwi found he couldn't worry about his family anymore-it was as if his mind itself got soapy-fingered. 3.Somebody in the back left corner made a crack about a magician's hat and vagina and the room roared. 4. When he opened in his eyes, Kiwi saw a slab of blue night up ahead-and then the stars began to fly. 5.Facts screamed at meteoric speeds across the board. 6. The Loomis Children's Hospital appeared on the other side of the bridge, a putty-colored complex ringed by the world's saddest playgrounds,with medieval looking bucket swings on rusted chains and the pastel skeletons of bouncy-horsies. 7. The girls twittering behind him like birds.